Drabble: Takaki At Your Service

[kokikee]

Setting: Host Club
Characters: Takaki Yuya x Arioka Daiki
Genre: Smut
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Daiki was dragged to a host club that serves both males and females by his female classmates. Takaki, as a host, was then assigned to serve Daiki.
A.N.: this a very very very very long drabble.. it;s not beta'ed.. grammar sucks to the max (past tense and present tense kind of mixed together).. and it's purely two girls fangirling over takaki and daiki.. and as writers, shamely, we have to admit that the way we wrote it is really informal..

Legend of Author: noichi_desu is in GREEN, keeconk is in BLUE

WARNING!!: it's smut.. these two boys are barely legal.. if you found it disturbing please DON'T read this..

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daiki : "can I change with other host? *gulp*"
takaki : "oh why? so I'm not fun enough for you? so you want more fun eh?"
daiki : *gulp*
takaki : "we can't have so much fun here when other hosts are staring at me, they're all envy me to have such a wonderful client like you"
daiki : *GULP*

*daiki, both hands on his knees*

takaki : "why are your hands shaking like mad? is it too cold here? let my warmth cares you then..." *puts his palms on daiki's*
takaki: *moves a little closer*
daiki:*moves aside to avoid takaki but stucks at the end of the sofa*
takaki: "dun be all shy.. first time, ne?"

takaki puts his index finger against daiki's chin, liftingnya his pink face up.. as he smirks, he pierces his eyes, flirting with daiki.. daiki gulps, pretty sure that he can collapse soon.. he turns his head away, trying to avoid takaki's tempting flirting eyes..

takaki : *sad look* "why did you avoid me? so...you dont like me?"
takaki : *sigh*
daiki : "eh!? ....eh?? n-no....thats not what I me--"
*takaki took a chance when daiki finally looked up to him and opened his mouth then he kissed him suddenly*
takaki : "gotcha"

takaki let his hand off from daiki, decided that he should take it slow.. as he tried to get his drink from the table, daiki grabbed his vest.. teeth were biting his lower lips, cheeks turned from pink to red, while eyes were still set on his knees..

takaki: "wat?"
daiki: "c-can w-we try a-ag-again?"
takaki: *smirks*.. “as you wish, ojou-sama”

takaki leaned forward and started to press his lips against daiki's.. this time, slowly, gently and full of care.. daiki could feel the butterflies tingling all over his stomach.. he placed his right palm on daiki's Blushing face, while the other hand was put on daiki's waist, pulling him closer.. his hand then trailed from his face to his head, stroking the younger boy's hair gently as he sucked slowly daiki's lower lip.

daiki didn't seem to enjoying it, he forced himself not to pushed Takaki away, while Takaki himself grabbed daiki's waist tighter.. daiki knew its no use to break off this now, so he tried to make things easier.. daiki slid his eyes off and shyly opened his mouth. takaki was surprised when daiki's tongue swooped in a curled around his..

daiki was trying to do it right.. he’s so inexperience in this, Takaki thought.. he didn’t know how to move his tongue correctly, he thought again.. No, don’t do it that way, that’s totally not right, he said to himself.. takaki pulled away, leaving daiki in confuse.. "ne, don't force urself too much, okay?" daiki's face went down, trying to hide his face..

takaki: “em..wanna go to the corner instead? i;m fine here.. but our guests are mostly females you know.. if you find it not comfortable here, we can move now..”

daiki looked around, finding that he was the only guy customer for the evening.. he then looked at his friends, who were girls, that seemed to enjoy themselves with the other hosts.. he then turned his head to takaki and nodded shyly..

daiki : "b-b-but... I'm not...sure.."
takaki : *put his finger on daiki's lips* "sshh... just be sure okay we'll have fun as long as you believe in me" *wink*

with that takaki grabbed daiki's wrist and dragged him to the corner.. takaki bumped daiki's back against the wall, make the younger boy moaned as he slid his hand beneath daiki's shirt.. he start to trail kisses from daiki's neck up to his opened lips.. daiki tried not to make a voice, thought that would be annoying takaki.. but what he didn't know is, takaki needed to hear that..

takaki : "let it out dear don't hold it back. let me hear with pleasure"

daiki wasnt really sure whether he really should let it out, but he did anyway.. surprisingly, instead of letting out his moans, daiki found himself gasping.. his body felt too intense to even letting out any voice.. takaki pulled away, looking at daiki intensely.. "how old are you?”

daiki: 17..
takaki: u r js a year younger than me.. why are u so nervous? you did kiss someone before right?

daiki nodded.. takaki pierced his eyes, wasnt really sure why daiki's acting all nervous.. daiki's neck muscle line was so intense, turning Takaki on that he could js attacked him any time..

daiki: but this is my first time kissing a guy..

takaki smirked and put his palm on daiki's cheek, gently stroked his blushing red cheek to calm him down

takaki: "just relax, okay,"
takaki: "or...." *he looked down into daiki's neck and move closer so daiki can feel his breath against his skin
daiki : "o-o-or....what?"
takaki : "or I will make your first time is not the last one,"

with that, takaki starts to slid his palm beneath daiki's shirt and rubbed his back gently.. he once again tried to kiss daiki on lips, but he's just gave him a quick peck and smirked.. daiki let out a small moan and frowned.. takaki gave him a quick peck once again.. daiki unexpectedly groaned and curled his hands to takaki's neck and moved takaki's face closer, "p-please...don't...t-tease me like that..."

takaki: *smirk* “you were just too cute when u say it was ur first time to kiss a guy..”

takaki leaned forward and pressed his lips against daiki.. his hand moved from daiki's back to the stomach, touching it lightly, as he sucked softly daiki's lower lips.. daiki was pretty sure that his knees went weak that he actually need to grabbed takaki's black vest so he wouldn't fall..

takaki: “stop being nervous.. i told u to relax, didnt i?”
daiki: “b-but.. i-i ne-never kissed a g-guy before.. this is a little weird.. i'm not gay, i'm not supposed to enjoy this..”
takaki: *raised his left eyebrow*, “neither am i.. i'm js as straight as u r..”
daiki: “then w-why are u doing this to me?”

"i dont know.. u r my first guy client to be honest.. so this is my first time kissing a guy as well.." he said as he pressed his body against daiki even harder.. daiki found it hard to breath when takaki kissed him again, shoving his tounge inside.. his eyes were so heavy and everything looked so blur.. the only thing that he could see clearly was only takaki's closed eyes..

he almost fell on his knees when takaki bit gently the tip of his tounge.. realising that daiki keep falling, takaki put his legs in between daiki's thigh, making sure that it would support daiki's weak body.. unexpectedly, takaki pulled away.. he looked around, trying to observe the surrounding.. when he set his eyes back at daiki, he smirked.. "should we stop?"

daiki: ehh??
takaki: my boss is looking at us right now.. he'll charge you even higher if i go any further..
daiki: ha?
takaki: but maybe.. if u want to come over to my place after my working hour.. we can continue where we left.. free of charge.. *smirks*

daiki stared at takaki's tempting eyes as he tried to manage his breath, "w-what..??"

daiki : ".....your..place?"
daiki : "...tonight?"
takaki: *grinned.. "I didn't say about tonight actually but if you asked..."
daiki: *gasped "n-no! I mean...."
takaki: "so its decided.. okay ,tonight after my work’s done!"

as Takaki tried to walk away, daiki pulled him back to where he was.. “I cant.. I need to be home.. there’s no one else home tonight, I need to be home to make sure that nothing happens”

Takaki smirked, “that’s even better. It’s your place then. Wait for me, okay?” daiki paused, found it hard to say no.. he just nodded lightly as he let go the older man.. daiki quickly grabbed his cellphone after takaki went off and pressed the numbers hastily with his trembled hand..

daiki : *on the phone* "h-hello?? k-keito, right!? don't come to my house tonight!! ....what? no! my video game is not b-broken and.... aaah just please d-d-dont come okay!"

just as promise, daiki waited for takaki.. he rested his back against the wall just right beside the back door of the club.. he put one palm on his forehead, unbelieving what he was currently doing.. “why the hell do I have to wait for him? I can just go back.. this is totally a joke.. he just played around with you.. he’s a host, daiki! You don’t even know his name!” he said to himself..

his watch showed that it was 11pm.. he groaned, trying to convince himself to just go home.. “he’s a host, and there’s no way that he’s going to finish anytime soon!” he groaned.. as he made his way, the back door of the club suddenly opened.. a guy with brown sweater walked out with a bag crossed his shoulder.. he looked at daiki, and then smiled, looked so happy..

takaki: “OMG! I’m so happy that you really waited for me!”

unexpectedly takaki jumped forward and hugged daiki tight... daiki’s face was pressed against his chest and he found it hard to breath.. after he pulled away, takaki looked at daiki, still smiling happily.. “I’m takaki, btw”

daiki was still in shock with what just happened.. “eh? Is he the same host from just now? Ehhhhh? Why he’s acting so childish?” daiki said to himself.. takaki grabbed daiki’s hand and started to drag him.. “so, which way is you house?” asked takaki..

daiki found himself couldn't find a coherent word to be spoken, because of warmth that flowed through Takaki's hand. his heart skipped a beat and he felt he could kill himself for feeling that way.. takaki moved slower as he realized he's been walking aimlessly for a couple minute because Daiki haven't said a thing.

takaki : "where's your house?" he looked back to daiki.
daiki : "o-oh...just turn left after that shop.."
takaki : "wait! you must be the one in the front right!"

takaki dragged daiki closer to him, made the younger boy walk beside him. "wahh I can't wait till I see your home ne!" takaki giggled, sounds like a little kid while he pulled daiki closer to his left arm.

Daiki looked up to his right and frowned. "is he the same host I've encountered with?" but suddenly as his face pulled closer to takaki's body, daiki feel something different with the host. "...you smells good.." daiki said that spontaneously. surprised by his own words, daiki pulled out his hand to his mouth.

takaki smiled and move his face closer to daiki's ears. "it smells better beneath,"..daiki gasped. he maybe just triggered the host button once again... and they arrived home when he thought it.

As daiki let takaki entered the house, his house phone rang.. he ran to the phone and answered.. “oh.. hi, mom.. yeah, I’m home.. ehm? No, I didn’t go out at all.. I;m home the whole time.. what? Who else’s here?? No one.. just me.. yeah, no prob.. see you in two days time then,” said daiki on the phone.

“your mom? Huaaaa!! You just lied when you said that you are alone!” said takaki, grinning, while ruffling daiki silky flat hair.. with hand still literally ruffling daiki’s hair, takaki drew himself closer..

“saying you are alone while I’m here.. ehm.. naughty you.. that’s kinky,” added takaki as he lifted daiki’s face and smirked.. “should we getting started?” he asked, still smirking..

with that smirk, daiki blinked his eyes open and try to control his breath. "no...he's still that host. that tempting host.." he thought.

daiki : "I...need to go to the bathroom.."
takaki : "what!? don't do it yourself, do me instead!"
daiki : "...what?"
takaki : ".....oh.no. I-I will wait in your room.. is that fine?"

daiki frowned, but then after he showed takaki his room, he quickly rushed to the toilet.
takaki looked around daiki's room. "its pretty clean," he thought. "too bad its a single bed." he sat on the edge of daiki's bed and took off his sweater. his hand ran through his hair and he lay down to daiki's bed.

When daiki entered his room, he found takaki lying on his bed, sleeping.. “eh? What the..?”.. he sat at the edge of his bed and took a good look at takaki’s face.. somehow, daiki felt as if he saw this face somewhere before..

Suddenly takaki’s hands grabbed his collar and pulled him down.. their lips were smashed against each other, a little harsh but sweet.. daiki was shock that he pushed takaki and pulled away.. his heart was beating so fast that he turned his head away and put both hands on his knees, with head down..

“ROFL! You are so cute!” takaki sat on the bed, looked amused.. daiki pouted his mouth and pierced his eyes at takaki.. bringing a host back to his place was a big mistake, he thought.

“Maaaa~, gomen! I won’t tease you anymore,” said takaki as he shoved his tongue inside daiki’s mouth.. daiki wasn’t as shock as before that he just gave in and let takaki do the rest.. he could feel takaki moved from the bed to in front of him as he pushed down daiki’s body against the bed.

Daiki pulled up his legs to the bed, adjusting himself nicely, while giving out soft moans as takaki bit gently his tongue.. heat rose to his cheeks, while his vein was rushing with the touches that takaki gave him inside his shirt.. takaki started to sucked harder with one hand on daiki’s stomach, while the other against daiki’s cheek..

He curled his tongue against the tip of daiki’s tongue, slowly and gently as he nibbled.. daiki gasped, with fingers curled on takaki’s white t-shirt.. takaki put his legs on each side of daiki, locking the younger boy in between his thigh.. he did the same thing to daiki’s tongue, and daiki gasped again right away.. “ne.. dai-chan.. ugh.. emm.. like it?” he asked between his kisses..

Daiki almost chocked when takaki called him dai-chan.. he pulled away.. his breathing was so fast that he was sure that the making out almost suffocated him.. he rose one eyebrow as he looked deep inside takaki’s single lid eyes.. “how the hell you know my nickname? I dun even recall telling you my name..”

"how do I know your name?" takaki smirked. "its too easy you know if you realized your house is near the host club..."

daiki : "yes its close...so...?"
takaki : "...maybe you didnt notice that but... I always watched you passed by after school,"
daiki : ".....watched me?"
takaki : "yes and I heard your friend calling you Daiki,"

both went silent.. takaki leaned forward and continued where he left.. daiki wanted to ask more, but he was drawn to the kisses.. takaki pulled away for awhile, taking off his tshirt, and continued kissing daiki.. he started to unbutton daiki’s shirt, with lips still locked against the younger boy..

as takaki pulled daiki’s shirt off, daiki broke the kiss.. “it’s arioka da..,” he said.. takaki shoved his tongue inside before daiki managed to finish his sentence..

takaki: “I know.. *kissed him*.. that the name is arioka daiki.. *kissed him again*.. I told that I watch you each time u pass by.. *continued kissing*

daiki stopped asking, thinking that the heat was too much to be ignored.. takaki pulled away and literally sat on top of him.. unbuckling daiki’s belt.. by reflex, daiki’s grabbed takaki’s hands and stopped him.. takaki looked at him in confuse.. “what?”

daiki: “it’s not fair. I don’t know your full name.. I dun even know whether takaki is ur surname or ur given name”

takaki moved daiki’s hand and continued unbuckling his belt.. after managed to leave daiki only with his boxer’s on, takaki leaned forward and kissed him again, with hands zipping down his own jeans.. “Yuya.. that’s the given name,” he said between kisses..

daiki's hand suddenly grabbed takaki's wrist that still zipping down his jeans. he forced himself to let out a word between his gasps. "I-i-its s..still--not fair.." takaki groaned as a sign of disturbance. "what else, now?" he moved his face right to the front of daiki's and stroke the younger hair eagerly. daiki shut his eyes, intimidated by takaki's glare just an inch before his eyes. "I--I'm just...curious...about how d-did you k-know my name"

"I have told you, haven't I!?" takaki lay down his head right before daiki's right ear. He whispered him some words. That's make daiki shivered. "Y-yes but.. that wasn't explained anything," Takaki sighed. He moved to daiki's face again.

"Now you, open your eyes." Daiki still shut his eyes, looks frightened. "Open your eyes." takaki repeated. Daiki opened his eyes slowly. His heart beat so fast in fear of takaki's anger because of his annoyance. But what he saw was takaki's gentle eyes. Takaki was smiling to him. Daiki blinked his eyes open.

"Isn't it obvious, ne, Dai-chan?" he whispered. "I'm searching all over the city to find your name. Why did I search for your name?" Daiki frowned. Takaki continued. "You know, I always pray to God, I wished I can see you closer, not just seeing you passed by...isn't it obvious ne, Dai-chan?"

Daiki gulped. Takaki smiled once again. "You know how happy I am to saw you walked in to the host club? Isn't it obvious, ne, Dai-chan??" Daiki opened his mouth. "You still want a reason, Dai-chan? Isn't it obvious?" Daiki didn't have to hear the reason. Takaki explained to him with his own way..

while gasping and trying to catch his breath, daiki instantly closed his eyes as takaki started to trail his kisses down to his neck and shoulder.. daiki hand curled on takaki’s head, running through the fingers between the soft silky hair.. right after bitting softly daiki’s ear.. takaki, once again, put his face right in front of daiki’s face, with daiki’s hand still on his head, “you can say that it’s kind of love at first sight.”

Daiki had no more complain.. he let takaki do whatever he wanted to. His kisses lead into licking. Started from the lips, down to his chest. daiki gasped as he licked on the skin near his collar bones. Takaki’s hand started to trail on his stomach, moving even further down as he slides his hand inside daiki’s boxer . unconsciously, daiki crossed his leg over the other leg. Takaki looked at daiki in wonder as he couldn’t move his hand any further.

“So-sorry. I’m ne-nervous,” said daiki.
“Oh my god. Don’t tell me that this is your first time,” takaki buried his face on the bed, just right beside daiki’s head.
“Hm, Takaki-kun. It’s not exactly my first time, but it’s totally my first time with a guy. And they said it’s hurt when you are the one on the bottom,” he added.

Takaki pulled his head from the bed and put his forehead against daiki’s. “it’s my first time too then if you put it that way,” he smiled at daiki while kissing him back, trailing his hand back to daiki’s stomach after decided to let him relax first. He pressed himself to daiki harder and shoved his tongue through daiki’s half opened lips as their bare skins touched.

With lips still against each other, takaki’s hand tried to find his bag. Once he found it, he opened his left eye to have a good look at his bag as his hand tried to find the lube that he brought. He pulled away for awhile and quickly applied the lube on his hand.

Daiki’s eyes blinked when takaki put his hand inside his boxer. He blinked again as takaki’s wet fingers slide inside his boxer touching his ass. “Oh m-my Go…” he couldn’t finish his sentence when takaki shoved his tongue to his mouth as he put his index finger into his entrance.

As his index finger entered smoothly, daiki moaned a little. Takaki pulled away and daiki quickly bit his lower lip. “Does it hurt?” asked Takaki. Daiki shook his head, still bitting his lip. Daiki wasn’t really sure whether it was really takaki’s first time, because takaki did it so carefully that he only felt very little pain. As he entered his second finger inside, daiki pulled his head back, moaning in pleasure.

Takaki pulled his fingers out and started to apply the lube on his member right after he took off his boxer. He put the tip of his member against daiki’s entrance. Daiki gulped and gasped in the same time, didn’t really know how it would feel like. As takaki started to push it in, daiki curled the bed sheet with his fingers tight. He panted and groaned some pleasured and hurt moans mixed together.

As he managed to put it in all the way, Takaki started to pound. Daiki instantly put his hands around takaki’s neck, softly groaning in pain with eyes shut. Takaki pressed daiki’s body against the bed even harder while putting his forehead against the bed, with one hand on his waist and the other arm against the bed just right beside his head. Takaki’s eyes were closed as he pounded, enjoying every second of it.

Daiki wasn’t really making sounds. Soft groans and moans came out from his mouth a couple of time, but nothing loud. Without even realizing it, one of his hands moved from takaki’s neck, wrapping it around own member, and started stroking. “Ne, are you okay there?” asked takaki as he kissed daiki’s cheek softly. Daiki just moaned really softly, telling takaki that he was okay.

“I t-think, I c-can remember you w-watching me before,” said daiki as he placed his hands against takaki’s chest. Before takaki managed ask anything to daiki, he groaned in pleasure as he shut his eyes. “Crap! I’m so sorry. I came first,” he apologized. But takaki wasn’t really needed to apologize as Daiki came not long after.

“Hahaha.. Lucky me! You came too,” said Takaki as he pulled away and rested right beside Daiki. He put daiki’s head on his arm, giving them more space in that single size bed. Daiki turned and buried his face against takaki’s chest. “It hurts now,” Daiki said.

"it hurts? sorry.. but wait! you do remember me!?"

"...I think."

"well but it looks like I'm the only one who fall for you at the first sight?"

"...p-probably.."

"ah crap I'm--"

"takaki-kun. if you fall for me at the first sight, then..."

"..what?"

"I fall for you at the first service" daiki said as he looked up and kissed takaki softly on the lips.

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we made this drabble on MSN, since we live on different city (or island, specifically).. we did this for about four days.. noichi_desu insisted to colour coded the drabble.. that's why you have green for her part and blue for my part.. she said people should know that the smut part is made by me.. damn, her! lolz.. (i still love u no matter wat, though).. but!! she's also damn good at the flirting part.. lol.. anyway, we dun really expect any good comment on this.. ^__^

Comments

[noichi-desu.livejournal.com]

WHAT IS THAT WARNING !? XDDDD *am I still underage too? lol*
LMAO dear dont u think MSN is the one who should we blame for this 8D

ILUSM SENSEI XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

♥♥♥

at lease our drabble........ takadai rules \o/

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

hahaha.. i kind of changed the warning.. lol..

yes!! we should blame msn for this!!! and u aint underage according to indonesian legality law.. ROFL..

ILUSM too sensei of romanticism! lolz

takadai rules!!!

btw, yank.. post jga donk di LJ lo.. hahaha.. kasi link ke sini aja.. gw gk mw jadi satu2ny yg bertanggung jawab akan drabble gila kita.. ROFL

[noichi-desu.livejournal.com]

AHAHA YEAH! XD

LOL... I'm legal to read.. but yet to write? XD LMAO

gw sampe skarang masih mrinding liat title itu lol

ahahahahaha siiiipppp ni br mo gw post! soalnya gw baru buka LJ lagi xD;;;

[laftkeichan.livejournal.com]

kyahahahahaahah
not read this yet!
but going to read it now,,

gomen smalem ketiduran lg,
somehow watching hone and clover make me very sleepy...
kyahahahhahahaha XDD

[laftkeichan.livejournal.com]

this is like so WOW in my head right now!!!

fdhjhgfdhjghdjghdfjedlrsl
you know! i'm speechless for a while and keep reading!!

kyahahahahahahahah
this soooo good!!
i'm really enjoy reading it as i'm picture them together on the bed *nosebleed
(my hentai aboachan instinct is working)

noi: Oh my god this part is so damn sweet.
"You know, I always pray to God, I wished I can see you closer, not just seeing you passed by...isn't it obvious ne, Dai-chan?"
you really melt my heart! mau digituin!
good job hunn XDD

kiki: OH OH O_____O
you really are sensei of...HG!
you really make HG here so damn fine!
the smut! WOW! don't blame me if i see HG in different point of view now! kyahahhahahaha WOW!

waaaaa
you both are so good please do make more!
it's a great combination by the sweet and the smut!
ILU both of you!!!
please make more!! i demand u!
hwahahahahaha
*HUG U BOTH TIGHT*

nb: again sorry for the spam!

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

kyahahahahahahaha...
be careful pam!!
i dun want u to die from lack of blood!!

and no i dont
i wont blame u if u see takaki from different point of view now..
u can put the blame on me..
lol..

yeah.. wat could be better..
noi got the sweet part and i got the smut part..
*goes to the corner and emoing*
haha.. it seems as if i'm totally a hentai. hahaha..

*hugs u back*
and i know i love comment spamming..

[dephi.livejournal.com]

OMG!!!
OMG!!!!

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

wat's with the OMG, dear??

did shock u too much??

ROFL

[freepureangel.livejournal.com]

LOL.
I seriously ROFLed at this fic. X)

“ROFL! You are so cute!” takaki sat on the bed, looked amused

Hm... I wonder if Takaki really says ROFL in real life. XD In reality. X3

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

hahahahahhaa..
i dun think he does..

it's a drabble after all..
it's totally MSN language that we used..
hahaha..

thanks so much for reading! :D

[setsuna-31.livejournal.com]

FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!! << I did something like Daddy Gackt!! Father of all Gheiness! *gets killed*

afjkgbbnonmasndbvubun <<< Gomen for that.

ILUSMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You don't know that TaDaiki is my OTP in HSJ!????

I LOVE IT!!!

Daiki you're so adorable!!!
Takaki!!!!!!!!!!! You're the smexiest gay evah!!!

You made my night!!! I really don't want to study Physics. Ahaha!! I'll just reread this one all over again..

More on this pairing, pls?????

Gomen for long comment~!

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

kyaaaa!!! really???
i totally have no idea that tadaiki is ur OTP in HSJ..
omg! i just found another similarity with you!
although i also like hikakeito, but i cant write smut on keito just yet.. LOL

smexiest gay ever.. hahaha.. nice term!
i think i'll put this pairing on my fiction list in the future.. hahaha.. glad u like it.. and i luv long comment anyway.. XXXD

*hugs*

[setsuna-31.livejournal.com]

*huggles*
Its not obvious, ne? I know. I'm a solid NishiKato shipper.
Hikaru x Keito? Isn't Keito a bit young? But people in England are so liberated. He can be the seme. Lolz! PEDO!!!

Hope to see more TaDaiki smut from you. Bwahaha~!!

[allboutp.livejournal.com]

babe, both of u r really good!!(a very good combination indeed)
n i like it soo much!
meant how nervous+shy daiki is, n how childish+seductive takaki is, i like the way u guys wrote it
its damn sexy!
how i wish u guys write more or maybe continuation??either way would be nice~ (bribing u wt tulip)

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

hahaha.. *taking the tulips*

thank you so much.. we didn't really expect anyone to really like the drabble, bcz we thought that it's to long..

i'm we're so glad that u like it! i'll ask noichi_desu whether she wants to make a continuation.. XXD

[xlolitsnozomix.livejournal.com]

sfuihgaehaeojh l
ngggyhhhhhhh. skjfhnalrjhalkjea
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH +_+
hotness!!! *falls over* sfjnhaledhja
you guys are freaking genius and you kno whats even more scary?? IM WRITING A OURAN!KAT-TUN FIC TODAY!!! >_< IVE BEEN PLANNING IT FOR AGES AND WHEN I SAW THIS FIC I WAS LIKE SFKHJAKLEHJA -falls out of chair- ahahahha(:
hothothothottt.

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

hahaha..
ur reaction is just so cute!
^__^
*hugs you tight*

omg! dun fall out of the chair! get hold of urself! hehe...

i'm so glad that u like it!
thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[kamewomezashite.livejournal.com]

geez, i love this one as well...

"...you smells good.."
"it smells better beneath,"
<3333

O.O you're indonesian?

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

that one is noichi's one.. hahha.. i went kyaaaaa when i read that one as well..

yes.. i'm indonesian.. why?

[kamewomezashite.livejournal.com]

well, I'm indonesian too...
i just read your profile...

[forte-tsuki.livejournal.com]

DAYUM dat took me an hour to finish. ^^ but dat was one hell of an hour. LOL! the parts where Takaki used messenger terms lik OMG and ROFL were so cute. ^^ u say you two are like, gods of the tadaiki smut world ^^ I guess i would be called a fan of you two then? ^^

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

XXXDDD.. i know.. there are lots of messenger terms there.. we were js too lazy to beta it..

glad u love it dear.. huaaa!!! our fans??
*blushes*

[ain-chan.livejournal.com]

*dies*

waa~~ Takaki as a host~~ i want yuto as mine~~

*smacked in the head*

KIKI-CHAN~~waa BOTH OF YOU ARE GOOD!!ESPECIALLY THE FLIRTING PARTS AND OF COURSE THE SMUTS~~

GAHAHAHAHAHA

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

ehhh!!! don't die!!!

hahaha.. it was jst the two of us being perverts.. hahaha.. it was my first smut,.. and it was quite shocking that i actually did js fine.. hahaa..

thank u dear! *hugs*

[dachnayary.livejournal.com]

Kiki-chan!!! XD
This fic is just soooooo HOT!!!! *heart atttack*
Takaki being a host while Daiki being the customer is just
a GREAT idea!!! *flails*
And Krito supposed to go to Dai-chan's house!!!! OMG! *dirty thoughts* *gets whacked*

And Takaki fell in love with DAiki at first sight! *flails*
I can't blame him coz DAiki is just...... KYAHHHH!!!!!!
And the smut! Kiki-chan the smut it's just..... I NEEED WATER!!!!!!
lol
And the ending is just love!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!

[ryokimayuu.livejournal.com]

ASJKLSAFHLKDJHAFJAS

Kiki-chan (can i call you that? >____<), you really totally rock at writing SMUTSSSSSSSSSSSSS~!!
Your fics are totally taking up a part of my life now~!!!
I'm lovin' you even moreee than before! xD

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

sure.. of course u can call me with kiki-chan.. XXD..

oh dear.. hahaha.. somehw i've been hearing this alot.. it was as if i'm associated with smut.. ROFL.. but i dont write smut often, really.. i need the mood to write smut, like seing takaki fucking daiki will be good..

thank u so much dear.. *huggles*

[kodochalover.livejournal.com]

cute!!!<3
so good ^^
i loved this!!!
hehe such good descriptions :]
im so happy now ^^
thank you :D

[keeconk.livejournal.com]

huaa!! thank u so much!! this fic was made about last year and i'm so happy that someone actually commented on this after so long!! thank u!!

<3

[kodochalover.livejournal.com]

You're very welcome :D

when i see good work i just have to comment it!! ^-^

[mighty-angel.livejournal.com]

awww so cute *add to memories*